Homework Writing

Writing week 2


13 comments:

  1. it was flooding and the mans watermelons fell out

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  2. I was delivering watermelons to the supermarket and the lock wasn't closed properly and when I went on the speed bump they all went exploding out but it was also flooding so they all floated away. The end

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  3. i was driving down to the shop so i went to my van and i sore some fruit so i hoped in my car and drove away and then my door was stall opined so all my stuff flouted away.

    the end.

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  4. Once apoun a time in Hokitika in the morning i got up from bed and got in by van to do my deliverys of watermelons . When i got in the van i went to a shop that is a food shop. Then i got back in the van then i went into a river then this rock bud in to me the van stop tje buck door of the van come out so all the watermelons come out then they was a loot of watermelonsto get. So i got out of the van and get the rock out of the river, then i went to pick my watermelons buck into the van. Then i went home that was the lost deliverys of watermelons.
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  5. This man was driving along in a flood the back doors flung open and the watermelons came flying out. Now he's trying to get as many watermelons as he can before they float away.

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  6. One morning I woke up and pulled my curtains, just to see that there was a flood. The whole street was flooded!!! I quickly got dressed and had my breakfast so I could go outside. I climbed out of the window so I didn't get water inside. Then I turned the corner of what I thought was the end of the block to find a water melon, then another. I looked up and saw about fifty water melons!! I saw a man trying to collect them all and put them in his van so I went over to help him. Once they were all in his van I went home to get dried up.

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  7. One day I ordered some watermelon I looked out the window and it had flooded oh no there's something that's going to go wrong my watermelon was here I picked the one I wanted and the other watermelons came out the person driving the van was really really mad he said I have to pick them all up and the man said I can't have any watermelon.

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  8. I was going on holiday to Australia on the way in the plane i seen a little island and it was flooded and i saw a man picking up watermelons one by one he was loading them into the back of a yellow van they looked like they had been washed away from the fruit market he must of been collecting them to take back.

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  9. One day I was going to work to get my van and all of a sudden whoosh out came a lot of water and water Malone when I went to get help the boss came along and said what was that noise Zack I didn't know what to say so I just blurted out D'know so he went back to his office and I went to get Sam oh and if you don't know who Sam is he is my best friend. We started cleaning up and he asked how it happened and I said "I wouldn't have a clue", he just laughed and we finished up for the day and I had to get dry

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  10. One day I was driving a van with watermelons in it and I had just packed them all up, but I forgot to shut the door to my truck! As I started driving I looked out my rear view mirror and saw that there were watermelons on the ground and people were shouting at me and pointing at the back of my truck. I went to see what they were looking at, and noticed my truck door open and all of my precious watermelons spread on the ground! They must have all rolled out the back door because they are round. To make matters worse, it had been flooding so my water melons were all bobbing about in the water. They were all smashed! "I'm ruined", I thought. But, perhaps if I got to work on time I wouldn't be fired. There wasn't much hope, or maybe there was..? Of course, when I got to work, I was fired, but now I have a much better job, I work for a company that works on growing square watermelons. So no one has to go through the same thing as I did!

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  11. The man is puttng the watermelons in the van.

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  12. there was A big floud and the water melons fell out so the man had to pick them all up

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  13. the man was putting watermelons in to the truck and then there was a flod

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