Homework Writing

Writing week 5



Write a poem about  daffodils. Use lots of descriptive words.

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  1. daffodils are pretty daffodils are nice they are nice just like you daffodils are yellow and as bright as a light they smell good I think just like you they are as pretty as the bright bright sun nothing is prettier than a bright bright daffodil.

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  2. A Daffodil is a symbol of Hope and Trust, for the one who must endure. A daffodil is the prize for fighting the good fight. A daffodil stands for peace and freedom no matter what the end.

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  3. Daffodils are pretty daffodils are nice they are nice just like people daffodils are yellow and as bright as a smile as me daffodils are think just like you they are as pretty as the sun daffodils are cool with me.

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  4. Brynne and ElisabethAugust 21, 2017 at 12:46 AM

    Acrostic poem

    Daffodils in German is 'Osterglocken'.
    Are growing at the beginning of springtime.
    Fun to smell.
    Fun to look at.
    'Ostern' means Easter in English.
    Daffodils means hope.
    Illnesses like Cancer is what it is raising awareness for.
    Lovely flower to look at.
    So that is what daffodils are for!

    Haiku

    Daffodils mean hope
    I like to smell daffodils
    Their smell is lovely

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  5. I wandered lonely as a cloud that floats on high over Vales and hills, when all at once I saw a crowd, a host of golden daffodils; beside the lake beneath the trees fluttering and dancing in the breeze.

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  6. Daffodils
    Days are closer to summer
    A beautiful spring flower
    Fields of Gold
    Freshly picked they smell beautiful
    Out of the garden into a vase
    Daffodils blowing in the breeze
    I love daffodils
    Lovely looking daffodils of different shades of yellow
    SPRINGTIME

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  7. Daffodils are prtty just like you
    Daffodil are awesome they think like you and live like you to

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  8. Daffodils are yellow daffodils grow in daffodils fields and a night they look like a light

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  9. Daffodils
    Daffodils are yellow just like lemons they look like the sun they smell beautiful and are beautiful you can put them in your hair you can put them eneywhere.

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  10. Daffodils are bright yellow and are one of the coolest flowers looking at a patch and when you look at it look's like gold.

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  11. daffodils
    daffodils are yellow like the sun they smell amazing
    and look awesome.

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  12. A Daffodil is yellow and smells good, when you look at it you will see it dancing and swaying in the breeze. when you see them at night they look like a bright light.

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  13. Daffodils are yellow and like a field of daffodils.
    Daffodils are cute they think like you.

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  14. daffodils are yellow like a chicken
    they smell like daffodils
    and they are amazing with there crown in the middle

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  15. daffodils are pretty daffodils are nice they are nice just like you daffodils are yellow and as bright as a light they smell good I think just like you they are as pretty as the bright bright sun nothing is prettier than a bright bright daffodil.

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    IanAugust 20, 2017 at 11:14 PM
    A Daffodil is a symbol of Hope and Trust, for the one who must endure. A daffodil is the prize for fighting the good fight. A daffodil stands for peace and freedom no matter what the end.

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    GeorgiaAugust 20, 2017 at 11:19 PM
    Daffodils are pretty daffodils are nice they are nice just like people daffodils are yellow and as bright as a smile as me daffodils are think just like you they are as pretty as the sun daffodils are cool with me.
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    Brynne and ElisabethAugust 21, 2017 at 12:46 AM
    Acrostic poem

    Daffodils in German is 'Osterglocken'.
    Are growing at the beginning of springtime.
    Fun to smell.
    Fun to look at.
    'Ostern' means Easter in English.
    Daffodils means hope.
    Illnesses like Cancer is what it is raising awareness for.
    Lovely flower to look at.
    So that is what daffodils are for!

    Haiku

    Daffodils mean hope
    I like to smell daffodils
    Their smell is lovely

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    EllaAugust 21, 2017 at 2:23 AM
    I wandered lonely as a cloud that floats on high over Vales and hills, when all at once I saw a crowd, a host of golden daffodils; beside the lake beneath the trees fluttering and dancing in the breeze.

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    mckenzieeeeeAugust 22, 2017 at 1:16 AM
    Daffodils
    Days are closer to summer
    A beautiful spring flower
    Fields of Gold
    Freshly picked they smell beautiful
    Out of the garden into a vase
    Daffodils blowing in the breeze
    I love daffodils
    Lovely looking daffodils of different shades of yellow
    SPRINGTIME

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    ellasAugust 22, 2017 at 1:48 PM
    Daffodils are prtty just like you
    Daffodil are awesome they think like you and live like you to

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    LIBBY JONESAugust 22, 2017 at 4:22 PM
    Daffodils are yellow daffodils grow in daffodils fields and a night they look like a light

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    AnneAugust 22, 2017 at 4:29 PM
    Daffodils
    Daffodils are yellow just like lemons they look like the sun they smell beautiful and are beautiful you can put them in your hair you can put them eneywhere.

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    ollieAugust 22, 2017 at 4:30 PM
    Daffodils are bright yellow and are one of the coolest flowers looking at a patch and when you look at it look's like gold.

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    megAugust 22, 2017 at 4:33 PM
    daffodils
    daffodils are yellow like the sun they smell amazing
    and look awesome.

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    TAMSIN GILLESPIEAugust 22, 2017 at 4:33 PM
    A Daffodil is yellow and smells good, when you look at it you will see it dancing and swaying in the breeze. when you see them at night they look like a bright light.

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  16. CHLOE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!August 22, 2017 at 4:39 PM

    daffodils are pretty and smell good two.they are very yellow and nice looking

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  17. LUCAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!August 22, 2017 at 4:41 PM

    daffodils smell like nothing they are yellow like a honey bee and they made it so we have to wear yellow on Friday sad

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  18. Roses are red violets are blue and daffodils are the prettiest flower
    I have ever seen.

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  19. daffodils come out only on certain times people where them on daffodil day they where them for people and to help with cancer they blow in the breeze

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  20. Daffodils
    Daffodils are as yellow as a lemon and as bright as the sun you can see it from a mile away because it's the brightest flower I know.

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  21. Daffodils
    are yellow like the sun they smell like nothing
    and we have to wear yellow on Friday

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  22. Dafidils
    All amazing
    Full of grace
    Flower
    Old but pritty
    Daffodils are so prity
    I like daffodils
    Light up the world
    Sun flower colour

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  23. Daffodils
    Daffodils are as bright as the sun and thay verve verve bright
    and beautiful.

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  24. Daffodils are cool
    Amazing
    Fantastic
    Fields of yellow
    out of the garden and into your hair
    Daffodils peals swirling in the wind
    I love daffodils so much
    Lovly
    Smells very nice

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  25. Daffodils are yellow like a banana.
    Daffodils are orange like the sun.

    Dad
    Apple
    Farm
    Friday
    Orange
    Dog
    Ice-cream
    Linklater

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